by Frinkles
Lu should go for Jordan. He seems to be a much better choice!
Tall, handsome, intelligent, caring..... why is she pining over Daniel when Jordan is smitten?
I was rooting for Lu and Daniel to work thru their issues, until jordan entered the picture. Now... I'm all for Jordan!!!
DAMN!! YOU HAVE DONE IT AGAIN. I AM SO ADDICTED TO THIS STORY. THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST ROMANCE STORY I HAVE EVER READ!! KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!
I LOVED HOW YOU THREW THE CURVE BALL (JORDAN) IN THE MIX NOW DANIEL CAN SEE THE WONDERFUL WOMAN (LULU) THAT HE IS ABOUT TO LOSE TO A SKANK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First of all to whoever voted this story a 75 you have brain damage. This story is way better than even a 100. Well well didnt Jordan come outta the wookworks. I want Lula and Daniel to be together but how can you not like Jordan. BUUUUTTTTTT something about him is seeming like he is a little to Mr Perfect. Maybe now Daniel will see what a big mistake he made by bedding that skank-ho. Thank you for sharing such a great story with us. You are an awesome writer.
now that he sees that someone else is interested in her he has the audacity to get angry!