All Comments on 'Homecoming Meal'

by jenny4her

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great series.

I loved reading this story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. I only wish the chapters were a little longer.

StarlessNightStarlessNightabout 14 years ago
Great story!

Wow, this was really hot. Naughty too! The rest of your stories are also excellent!

kayandsteve69kayandsteve69about 14 years ago
Very Hot!

We loved this story. Sex between women in public places is a huge turn on for us (especially Kay). Kay and Steve

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
eh?

it was just okay. are you a guy? because it certainly seems like it is coming from the perspective of a man. one thin that bugged me was that you went from "we went to ...." to "she was unbottoning..." next time try to keep the tenses the same. But it did manage to make me wet so not a complete failure ;)

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