All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 02'

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RamazaRamazaover 3 years ago

Very strange story, it feels like we started in the middle of it, without any context in relation to their background or their life’s previous to this vacation? We just got dropped off a week into the vacation and everyone is having sex with whom ever they like apparently and it sounds like Brianna is a succubus.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 year ago

Someties I over think these stories. I feel sorry that characters are having sex with imaginary lovers (people as they once were and not as thry are). So much for self-awareness, self-assuredness, self-confidence, solid ego and id. As a romantic, it appears that the intimacy, sensual caring, romance, and adoration and acceptance of physical change has died.

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