All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 01 Ch. 12'

But I soon found that Brie had put a veil on the whole family again, and the situation that Frank was in, is just another guise that she has created.

I hope that he learns to stay away from his cousin.

The sex between Frank and his dad's sisters was very erotic and kinky, but I was hoping that he would use more of his powers to win over both of the women to his camp, and have at least someone other than his mother as an ally.

Brie is definitely out of Frank's league at manipulation and knowledge of the clan, and he has to acquire a safety guard that keeps him safe from that bitch.

With getting new chapters daily, it's like the old radio days, listening to some of my favorite series.

It gives the reader a chance to think of all of the scenarios that could happen to the good guys.

Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the comments, DigDaddy, as always.

The comparison to the old radio programs is most flattering.

As a romantic, the closest thing to love appears between Frank nd his mother. Some readers may find the sex the main factor in whether they like the story or not, For me it is the chemistry, love, and emotional sensitivity between characters. With thaat said, I have rated chapters 1 through 12 a 4.