All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 02 Ch. 04'

I've really enjoyed the story so far... keep up the good work!

Thank *you* for the kind words. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

JD

With Frank trying to team up with Iva, he may come out on the short end of the stick in that deal.

I wonder how Natalie is going to respond when Iva devours her son Pat?

Good chapter.

It looks like Frank hasn't learned as much as he thought that he had, if Iva is sill sronger than he is.

Thanks for the read

Thanks for the comments, DigDaddy. You raise very good points.

that was a very tangible well written moment as the alliance was forged there.

if she betrays him, well... you had me fooled.