All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 05 Ch. 01'

JD - I am really glad to see you back and continuing this great story. This chapter has got some superb character development and some sizzling mom-son sex. It is fast paced and exceptionally well written. I am waiting for the next chapter and I hope it doesn't take as long. AnHoa Rifleman

Hey AnHoa Rifleman. Thanks, as always, for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Don't worry, the rest of Part Five will be appearing soon. Should be one chapter a day until they have all appeared. (There are six total.)

Best,

JD

Odin makes special mention of jdunyer, the mortal who showed the gods what it is to be a legend, and dedicates that day's feast to him:

"And while the rewards of Valhalla await all of Asgard's heroes this day we honor a hero of Midgard. A mortal who sacrificed everything for a land not his own. This day, a human showed the gods what legends are made of. HAIL THE MORTAL, JDNUNYER!"

I'm deeply honored to have pleased Odin. :P

JD

I would gladly trade my left nut for one day with Gabriela.

_Einar_

Well said, Einar. :)

as a anon i can only make 1 post per chap... i did not know that or i would have responded to some stuff i wrote a few chaps back

good chapter like where its heading (ominous foreshadowing is what id really call it) but why is it up to the boys to come up with a plan males aren't stronger then females in this world iva ate silas, daph is the real heavyweight so why is it up to eric and nick? whichever the case chivalry or misogyny just doesn't seem like it would exist in the homelands.

also in the conversation between nick and eric someone would ask about erics plan if he is going to be so dismissive of the other plans on the table and abrasive to the people he's dragging into war