All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 06 Ch. 04'

clever parallel (or is it foreshadowing) between the meaningless race issues in earlier chapters and the actual racism exported by the garden and the glade.

also there are some major character changes that are surprising i suppose they are understandable but they do seem to have happened quickly things like eric the cool headed, kurt the jerk

still waiting for the ladies to step up there is no reason they cant be badass

just my opinion i could be wrong

Glad you noticed the parallel. :)

I tried setting those changes up in past chapters. Guess it didn't come across as well as I'd thought.