All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 07 Ch. 05'

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Anonymousover 11 years ago

one of the things i liked about your writing was that events mattered, trials and tribulation all contributed to a character. Cahill got all memory mashed and was fixed in the next few pages, not a serious flaw in the chapter mind you, but it is something to ponder...

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