All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 08 Ch. 05'

JD: I have to admit that I was confused by Chapter One, largely because it has been some time since you finished Part 7. This began to clear up in Chapter Two and I was back into the narration with Chapter Three. Chapters Four and Five demonstrated an extraordinary twist in the plot. I was totally unprepared for Titiana's son to betray her, for her to disown him or for Cahill to discover that his head had been rearranged before he had even arrived in Fairie. There are other masterful plot issues that I won't get into other than to say that you created one romping story. I am hopping from one foot to the other waiting to see what happens.

Your writing is superior to almost everyone else who posts on this site and every day I check the "new stories" page to see if another Homelands is being offered. Your sentences are clean, your characters intriguing and your dialogue easy and natural. Your ability to write erotic encounters between men and women is excellent. I sense that you are a polished writer (well, there is no doubt about that) and that you are putting this material up on this site for your own amusement. I am hopeful that you will continue the narration to the end. I have to know what happens. AnHoa Rifleman

Thanks, as always, Rifleman. I appreciate it more than I can say!

we have turncoats..(my showdown between bros is back on) in truth i would have been disappointed if they didn't bear the scars from their capture or something more sinister at work. not sure Aeife should be playing with full deck either, but she was a queen so im willing to accept she's made of sterner stuff. i would say that Ober's "defeat" made more sense in light of this, but Tat wasn't thrilled that he threw the contest. im genuinely intrigued by the angle your villains are playing