by cndallas
That ending was so good... that story was sexy and the ending was hilarious! I agree we need more!
It was hot and the ending was great. There were a few typos though, so try to proofread next time.
OOOOOOOOOOOO LOVE THE ENDNG DONT LET THIS ONE STOP HERE GOT TOO HAVE MORE LIKE MAKE HIM INTO A LOVE SLAVE OR SOME THING
Gotta admit that I too loved the ending, too cute! Love men who suck cock no matter the circumstances...
I agree with the other comment, a good story doesnt have to be a long one. In fact I have read some, that would have been better if they were shorter. Your story had me laughing hard. First I was hard, then I laughed. Keep it up.
Hey, these stories don't have to be long, extremely graphic, or even particularly believable to be great! I absolutely loved your ending!!!!
And, I understand loving cocks! My wife and I both do!!!
Rich
It was pretty good, although a bit short. The end was the kicker though. Cute.