All Comments on 'Homunculus Diaries Ch. 02'

Pretty sure it's penis not penus

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There's a wonderful naïveté and light-heartedness to this story that's a breath of fresh air. There's such a lack of good erotic humor on this site, but this story is a wonderful change. Keep up the good work.

Other Anonymous, that's the joke. Remember, she's naive.

I'd love to take credit for that, but I wrote that part while half asleep. Then I proofread it right after waking up. Also, I very rarely use that word to refer to it in writing for some reason.

very funny. great writing, more?

This one won't be letting me go till I'm satisfied with it. That said, be patient. I don't put any real life aside for these, so my pace varies.