by fsqueeze
Nice story. You need to fire your editor. The grammar, spelling, and punctuation really suck. Honest-honest.
Loved them! I like that it wasn’t just the wham bam straight to the sex part!
You've captured a nervous, eager, shyness that seems to truly capture the tension
Man, it is so refreshing to read stories that aren't all about tits, pussy, and/or legs. Finally we got some big booty white girls up in here! And if anybody thinks that Amy's proportions are unrealistic, damn near every female in my family has a big bubble ass, and we're white as can be. I spent the majority of my adolescence drooling over my older cousin's bubble booty (she looks just like a shorter version of Lauren Phoenix with a bigger butt), so I am definitely looking forward to more of this story.
Cheers! You let someone proofread your work. Excellent.
Great story, too. Thanks.
Hopefully you continue this series. This chapter was a really good beginning
Very yummy indeed! I’m looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you!
This one reminds me of a similar one I read a few years ago but it never went beyond 1st chapter so I really hope you'll expand this one properly. It has potential, is sweet and caring, in touch with real life and easily entertaining. But do try to keep it between them at least for now so that the romance can develop.
5*
I hope you keep going with this. Maybe if Amy is really impressed with sex then Aunt Cyn might want some too.
All cousins should experience such uninhibited love