All Comments on 'Honeymoon Surprise Ch. 01'

This was the honeymoon? This is the beginning of the end. The husband is a dud.

Great news folks, it's ok to cheat if your SO cuts you off. I can just step out and have some fun next time happens.

Seriously, why wouldn't she and Jeff just divorce? They don't communicate, and she appears to not have any problems stepping out on him. So why are they married? Economic support and someone to do the dishes? That's a pretty crappy reason to be married.

I think my problems with the story are that it's a tale of a failing marriage which isn't at all an erotic subject. He's not connecting with her needs and she's cheating!

Well, what can I say? The setup for this story was just too unbelievable. A newlywed husband acting like he's been married 20 years, and then the size DDD breasts, in a bikini, no less. What is it about DDD breasts, anyway? Sorry, but I could not suspend my disbelief to get past the DDD's.

When did everyone get so critical? It sounds like a good start to a "story"! I'm suprised that Anonymous is reading erotica on the way home from church!

...."Man-hatin' Marriage" -(cliches included). But it's salvageable. Then again, that's what they said about Afghanistan.

What a beautiful, sexy story. One of the best ever! Thanks so much!

Very intrigued... Would love to read the conclusion.