All Comments on 'Hooker for the Day'

by mernie99

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Don't all mothers tell their daughters to never deliver the pussy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Best ending ever

Great story and best ending ever. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More than just well written...

This story is more than just well written! Very hot sex, some aspects of BDSM and great oral action, but also wonderful, realistic dialogue, no spelling or grammatical errors and a fabulous story with a great twist at the end. Mernie99 can truly craft a story that is erotic. Very nicely done!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What a great story

Fantastic story very naughty and very exciting done it for me

CopyCarverCopyCarverover 17 years ago
Wow!

Literate, erotic, and an ending with more twist than the Gran Prix de Monaco. Great job, Mernie.

ps: the "ouch" really isn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great, unexpected ending!

Very good introduction and setup. And the ending was unbelievable!!!

tommynova2001tommynova2001over 17 years ago
great twist

Makes one think about all the 'fantasies' that would be pretty close to the reality if carried out!

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