All Comments on 'Hoover'

Whoever requested reality shoul be happy with this one!3E6E

Yep, it was real. A scene played out all over the world by guys who don't have a chance at the young eye candy.

Oh well, lifes a bitch and then you die.

I am typing this fast because this story was so depressing I slit my wrists......I'm fading aw

In the bulletin board is a tread about realism - this would be my version of that. I imagine most men have been in that situation at one point or another - especially as we age: our wants exceed our abilities. LOL

Thanks for the comments.

... and just like a Hoover, it sucks. Though of course that was the point :)

A creative writer can have a realistic story that is still engaging, interesting and erotic.

While this was realistic it was not engaging, interesting or erotic.

Sad, boring and depressing, yes. But are those the things I want to read? No.

about realism, I want to be entertained. Who wants to stay depressed over an ex, or a now-frigid still-not-ex?

Wonderful images. I followed the story as if I were looking at it in a picture book.

Painfully realistic.

I do feel like I've watched this happen to a lot of guys in bars diners and restaurants etc. It is what life is like more often than not for guys in strip clubs I think.