All Comments on 'Hopefully, A New Beginning'

by True North

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littleblackdress50littleblackdress50about 14 years ago
Nice job.

Liked the story very much. Good luck in the contest.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 14 years ago
Good story

You are correct--people in offices should get out more. And you've pointed out one of the special benefits of going outside on Earth Day. Good luck on the contest.

Renags21Renags21about 14 years ago
Great Story - One of my favorites

I wish you the best of luck on the contest, though I doubt you'll need it. Your writing is superb, and the sex incredible.

janiexxjaniexxabout 14 years ago
Lovely story.

Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
good story

Great way of incorporating the earth day theme. Good writing-enjoyable story.

PaganKittyPaganKittyabout 14 years ago
Mmmm..

Loved the way a little imp came and woke him from his little bubble of routines. Good story and great way to incorporate the theme. Best of luck in the contest and keep writing! Blessed Be =^_^=

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Delicious fantasy

Well-written, delicious fantasy. You're as good at short stories as you are in person...left me hot and wet, just like you did.

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