All Comments on 'Hopes, Dreams and Porn'

Can't believe I'm the first to comment. I very much enjoyed reading your ambitious effort & look forward to more. Enjoy the protagonist's voice; found it dark, bit gloomy, very kind, & unique.

A hidden treasure.

Please continue but not taking two years to do it :-)

I want to read about how they trash Jacob.

he just cant fathom it yet, TK U MLJ LV NV

We talked about this and I gave you some criticism. Just showing my support on here too!

Come on, It can't be that you don't have any ideas on how to move forward. This story has way too many openings and great possibilities on how to go forward! A scam Jacob needs to be put down. Why not make it an IT project, with cameras and streaming video in his house. A plan where those delicious friends try to trap Jacob. You could make awhole bdsm chapter around him. Anyway I hope you'll.find the plot you need to go further. This was way Hot!