All Comments on 'Hornet's Nest Ch. 01'

Looks to be an interesting story.

is part 2 going to be more of her side since this was mostly about his whining world view?

Whine whine whine, fuck he is a wimp!

Teenagers :D I agree. If he started out with his shit together there'd be no room for development.

I just finished chapter 1 and am a little bit miffed because I am completely hooked and don't have time for this! Actually, I do. I'll make time.

Bravo. You are mighty young and talented. And brave, I might add. Literotica provides a very diverse audience, but by posting a long series in romance without sex in the first chapter, you are appealing to a select group. I am one of them, and looking forward to this journey. Forward ho! (oh, and 5 stars, of course!)

Good start. The characters introduced so far are pretty well fleshed out.

Redlion and Anon from 7 years ago,

You folks talking about him whining as if it's abnormal for mids his age to behave like that. He's going through teenager things and he's trying to sort it out in time.