All Comments on 'Hornet's Nest Ch. 04'

when is guy fawkes day?the 5th of nov right?i ask because the fire and the fireworks were before and after halloween which is in oct.so how can they both be on the same day but not?will we learn what or who her parents really are?

Thank you for another great chapter to add to a remarkable story. Easily worth 5 stars.

The first bonfire was the students taking over the park when they shouldn't have in October, the second is proper council-organised celebrations in November. Sorry for any failed clarity with that.

There's more of Violet's parents coming.

No stars for this ongoing mess.

You write very well - your characters are well-drawn, your situations realistic and your dialogue very natural: none of these are easy to achieve. Good work so far, and don't let any snippy comments get you down - you have a genuine talent that can only grow with time and practice.

Don't forget to vote, everyone!

Please continue with the story...waiting anxiously. Ignore the naysayers, they have no taste.

awe of your talent - seriously! you take me on a trip to new worlds with just enough of each to let me think that i have a clue what is going on...you frickin' tease you...good on ya mate!!!

You are as a talented an author as I have read on Lit. I am enjoying the Brit experience. Please disregard the critics who don't have the balls to sign their anonymous names.

Really awesome story. Impressive writing, interesting characters. Quite a pleasant discovery.

Waiting for answers, quite a crew on both side of the families, but both seem to be on the wrong side of the law as we know it. Keep writing, interesting story.