by IvoryTusk
This just keeps getting better with every chapter. Easily worth 5 stars.
You are adding too many twists and turns. I know that it is the way that the characters would have behaved in the given situations, but this is really getting out of hand.
it seems to me this story is on track for what's been building since "It's Who You Know". I just have no clue how Vi and David are going to come out of this intact.
Deception with the rationale of protecting David is pure bullshit. Vi isn't worth the trouble.
I'm loving this story, and I'm all worked up about the fate of David and Tyler, and everyone else involved. I don't know how I'm going to last until the next chapter posts! Thanks for such an engaging story.
Lo_Pan,
Are you the same anon that commented about how you didn't expect the thriller part in the previous series?
If you bothered paying attention, they're dropping hints everywhere yet again. It's not just out of the blue, come on now.