All Comments on 'Hornet's Nest Ch. 09'

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EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69almost 9 years ago
Brilliant!

Once again, I praise your writing production rate! It is a thrill to see a story from you every day. I love how gritty and real yet sophisticated the dynamics are in this love story and story about family! Bless xoxoxo keep going - you're an incredibly amazing writer! P. S. Yaaaay I got to favourite this chapter first!

Sid0604Sid0604almost 9 years ago
Just keeps getting better and better...

These chapters have all been very underrated. This is a great story that would do extremely well as a movie. Another chapter that is very easily worth 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Another

Brilliant chapter. I am on pins and needles waiting the upcoming (fingers crossed) scene between her and Zack.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I just love this story so much!

It feels a bit like the future state of our country the way its going...

And also picked up some references to Reading, I think? That's my hometown, although I've not lived there for a while.

Anyway, really brilliant writing - getting into the heads of the main characters so well.

IvoryTuskIvoryTuskalmost 9 years agoAuthor

It's very awesome you picked up on that - yes, Reading is David's hometown.

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago
love is blind

love is forgiveness and caring and not making excuses just accepting. good story

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