All Comments on 'Horror on the Beach Ch. 02'

by KrakonJuliette

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Frighteningly Sexy

This story had just the right amount of weird monster mutant stuff in it without going completely overboard to make it silly. Great work!

DreamerByTheDiamondsDreamerByTheDiamondsalmost 7 years ago
How long can he keep this up?

Eventually the poor girl's going to have to shave her legs ... and maybe sometimes eat. Krakon's a funny character for some reason. Not sure why, but he makes me laugh. Maybe it's his playful, experimental, yet also rather violent nature that makes me think, "Okay, let's see where he goes." I'm also wondering who in the world sat down in a laboratory and thought, "Yeah. Let's make a scary creature that's intelligent enough to rebel against us. That's a good idea." These aren't criticisms. They're just my thoughts. Nice story overall.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Creepy, sweet, and sexy

I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great job!

The writing is absolutely beautiful. You guys did a great job :)

Sorry for being redundant :p

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great writing...

Loving it. Please continue, and don't make her fall for him...The rough sex and non con is perfect.

belle1belle1over 6 years ago
Excellent writing

Keep writing these. I loved the hard, painful annimalistic fucking and her accompanying orgasms, unwanted as they were.

MEWatcherMEWatcherover 6 years ago
This is a fantastic story

Please continue the story, keeping as much non con and orgasms against her will coming. Keep it up, I'll hang with you for as long as this saga lasts. I hope you write more stories....... soon.

KrakonJulietteKrakonJulietteover 6 years agoAuthor
Please be patient

Dear readers,

I haven't abandoned the story, don't worry. There will be more chapters in time. It will take a couple of months, please be patient.

Plot ideas, feedback, suggestions are appreciated. Preferably use the contact form on my profile. I guarantee you I will read and consider everything.

All the best!

KrakonJulietteKrakonJulietteover 6 years agoAuthor
Updates

Check my biography for updates.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What’s next?

I wonder if he/it went out to find food/water? Please update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What happened?

Did you abandon this story? I hope not! Any type of conclusion would be appreciated, even if it’s just Juliette escaping and getting back home.

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