All Comments on 'Horse Club Ch. 01'

by Justtoold

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

The setting and storyline are fine, but the dialogue needs work. People don't talk like that.

SHANNON_OKAYSHANNON_OKAYalmost 12 years ago
OMG

THAT STORY WAS HOT

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ridden hard

nice story idea. Liked the way you worked the plot to show how she got so horny and was manipulated into putting out for the two brothers. Do you have any more about her adventures

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