All Comments on 'Hose Handling'

WHEN YOU USE THE TERM FOR "FRIEND" IN THE FEMALE CONTEXT, IN SPANISH, IT IS AMIGAS NOT AMIGOS. IT WAS A NICELY WRITTEN STORY W/ OBVIOUS KNOWLEDGE OF FIREFIGHTING TERMS & EQUIPMENT; MY ONLY ADVICE WOULD BE TO DRAW THE TEXT OUT A BIT AND MAKE IT LAST LONGER....WOMEN LIKE THAT THO...HEE HEE