All Comments on 'Host Hunting Ch. 01'

Well written, though you should work with a second pair of eyes to catch the small errors in spelling and grammar that detract from the story. Overall, it was an interesting read. Hopefully, as i do not see a chapter reference, you will continue this story line. It is a very welcome change from your usual fair.

The story comes first, screw the spelling errors. I cannot wait to see where these two go next.