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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Quite a story, but....

Quite a good story, but it felt like it wasn't finished yet. I think you'll might have added a few scenes to get it interesting enough. Maybe a sequel to end it. But still, a good story.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

very good story but you cut it way to short. i was just staring to realy enjoy that big kitty cat and you just bring daddy back.. i hope we get another visit to this wonderfull world...trs

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Another

Nice to see you with another story from your Borealan universe, I enjoyed the others. I've always wondered if you would do a chapter 3 of "Fineprint". It sticks in my mind if the matriarch kicked her fast food habit or just got too fat to move.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sequel please!

I really enjoyed this, but I feel like Becky and Beltza need a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
pretty good

but IMHO it belongs in "non consensual"

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BigYin1981BigYin1981over 5 years ago
Umm what?

I'm confused, why have you reposted Hostage? I started reading it then realised i already had :/

SnekguySnekguyover 5 years agoAuthor
@BigYin1981

It was removed by a moderator and had to be resubmitted.

Nightwolf1221Nightwolf1221about 5 years ago
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Are you going to write anymore books like this? Between a human female and a Borealis male? Because this book is the best I have ever read, besides Highway to Krell.

Eternal_WandererEternal_Wandererover 3 years ago

I would love to see more human woman x male Borealis Male couples!

FrenchTomcatFrenchTomcat4 months ago

I like the universe you're building but not that episode. Rape & pain are not my kink. And her change of mind is too brutal.

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