All Comments on 'Hostage of my Heart Ch. 02'

Finished work for the day and able to sit down in peace with this.

Lovely bit of sadism and denying Richard his turn with her was delicious.

Her head butting Helena was pure brilliance.

Rand to the rescue in ch 4 is my prediction.

Well done Steffi. Have a well deserved drink of whisky or some cake :-)

The thing that will keep me reading here is I have no idea where this is going or how it will end! Who's it gonna be? Good Guy Rand? Or Dark Horse Sainte, though he seems hard to redeem, what with shooting some chick in the face, and with the small revealed tidbits of his sadistic past. I have to find out! Good work!

~Eris/D&T

Good job. I too am curious/hooked to see how this story goes!

Add anal and let him know that opal is his daughter. that will be a great surprise

Enjoying as it just gets better as we move toward the ending, while hoping it does not come very soon.

is that commenters so far have only mentioned the men in this story and nothing about the power of Opal

I guess that says it all. :-(