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by oggbashan

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estragonestragonover 12 years ago
A Good Story

well-told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Could be better

The story is nice, but the writing was at times clumsy and less than vivid, almost tame in the descriptions of things.

You didn't particularly make me feel horror or fear or even interest in the ghostly encounter.

Take some risks and move from the comfortable.

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...