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by TheOldWidow

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TheOldWidowTheOldWidowalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you

A big thank you to editor ExperiencedStoryteller for his valuable suggestions and constructive help.

Thank you to readers who have commented to me, I appreciate you reading my story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Another Good One J.

Loved this: "A mature male in sexual prime; with a woman his equal"

pooky12349pooky12349almost 7 years ago
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This was a story that had to be read, every word of it. I enjoyed it and am looking forward to more.

I have a question, this business with Tony and his security stuff sounded pretty realistic. Is this your own experience or that of someone you know? Or perhaps research? I ask because it sounds so authentic, like someone who is a Navy SEAL and has seen combat.

Thanks for a great story.

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