All Comments on 'Hot Days and Hotter Nights Ch. 01'

Wonderful so far. Cant wait for the rest

I like your writing but after this first chapter, I honestly don't want to read the rest. I know that Salamacia will win in the end and I actually hate her character type.

Whether its a man, woman, or futa... I hate self-assured assholes who force people into situations that they didn't want to be in. I feel terrible for Sena but I know that she'll probably submit to Salamacia eventually and I hate that.

I've dealt with people like Salamacia in real life and I absolutely can't stand them. I know this isn't your problem and you should write what you please regardless of what anyone thinks but, I really just wanted to get this out in the air.

Screw Salamacia and any real life assholes like her.

Once again, you're an excellent writer.

I would reply privately, but you're anonymous. I actually agree with your review. I've already been editing the earlier parts of this story, and your observation about Salamacia is being addressed. The edit will give her more depth and less bitchiness.

I love the futa in female idea but hate that your characters a little bit of an asshole tho I do wanna see where this story goes. I kinda wanna see her win in the end

I like Salamacia and Sena. Sal isn't unkind, she's just bold and somewhat abrasive. She seeks to do well by Sena and that's what really matters. I've already read the whole thing. Please write more!! I am truly interested to see how Sena and Sal progress. Senas character development is the most interesting. I want to see how she adapts and overcomes. I enjoy this story!!!

Are there other stories in the nine lands?