All Comments on 'Hot Days and Hotter Nights Ch. 02'

Very well written, intersting story. I hope to see much more of these two

I'm very much enjoying this story. Your pacing is wonderful too. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter lol :)

Because this just seems silly.

I need more, like yesterday!

This is great, the mythology is quite similar to that of my favorite show The Legend of Korra and I love that and the story itself is working put great... I have 2 questions for you: 1- how many chapters do you plan to have for this series? and 2- when will the next chapter be posted?

Your stories are well written. My only complaint, and mind you it is a small one is the following. Proofread your entries before uploading. Just typo-ing is all. It draws me out of the story for a split second. Other than that, keep them coming! Looking forward to reading more

where is it where is the next chapter this has gotten so good then it just stops. please continue this is well written and i wish to read more

I love futa/female stories and you write well. Are you going to continue?

Pretty good, but please use less commas. I felt like many of them weren't needed, and a semicolon or em dash would be much better at times; they add variety.