All Comments on 'Hot Days and Hotter Nights Ch. 03'

I've enjoyed the story up to this point, but this chapter was the best by far. The sex was amazing, and the story apart from it was interesting, too.

When Sena takes control of salamacia... Lovely~!

Your writing is excellent and I love the setting but I don't feel that Salamica actually loves Sena, it feels more like she is just something she wants to possess. Salamica retorts that Rhio let her make her decision on marriage for herself but seems to have no qualms about taking that decision way from Sena. She says she didn't make the decision lightly but feels like to me she made it only for her own happiness not Sena's. That's the only bit that bothers me otherwise it's perfect.