All Comments on 'Hot For a Retired Teacher Ch. 10'

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twatstretchertwatstretcherover 8 years ago
Great Story

What a great story. I wish my wife liked sex that much. Not that I would share her. Can't wait for the next one.

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 8 years ago
Diminishing returns

As much as I loved this story, I think it should have ended with the marriage. The "shared wife" theme is getting repetitive. It's traveling ground already covered.

And speaking of traveling, part of the charm of this story was the road-trip aspect, which is missing now. Put them in an RV, traveling the country, meeting all sorts of swingers and it may be worth continuing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sorry but,

This has become like a once popular TV show that had long since jumped the shark and overstayed its welcome. Time to make like a vampire and put a stake in this.

Firmhands5Firmhands5almost 7 years ago
Just a longing hint

Of a baby - will be interesting how this happens, if it does

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