All Comments on 'Hot for Step Brother?! Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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I loved this would definitely love to see what happens with these characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hope there is more to come!

You have a great story line going here, where alot can happen. I hope you bring out some more soon .

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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Please make a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

please make a chapter two, this is such a good story and I need more depth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
umm

Ummm, where's the rest?!?!?!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 5 years ago
Wow!

You've got a good story going here. The build-up in this chapter ends with the rape at the end. You also have the makings of a great incest story with Ry.

strafe1701strafe1701almost 4 years ago
Next chapters?

Several of your stories, including this one, are listed as Chapter 1 but are not continued. Are there plans to continue and/or finish any of them? They’re good stories.

kandilkandilabout 2 years ago

WHY DONT YOU FINISH YOUR STORIES? THEY ARE GREAT!

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