by fms9612
I loved this would definitely love to see what happens with these characters
You have a great story line going here, where alot can happen. I hope you bring out some more soon .
please make a chapter two, this is such a good story and I need more depth.
You've got a good story going here. The build-up in this chapter ends with the rape at the end. You also have the makings of a great incest story with Ry.
Several of your stories, including this one, are listed as Chapter 1 but are not continued. Are there plans to continue and/or finish any of them? They’re good stories.