All Comments on 'Hot Fun in the Summertime Ch. 01'

This story, which is quite good actually, is repeated 3 or 4 times. WTF?

I liked the story and was looking forward to reading a hot 7 page fuck fest until I realized it was really a 2 page story repeated 3 times. Not cool!

Seems like the lit guys fucked up here

Hey what the ****! How about editing this 3x screwup!?

Thank you anonymous (times 3) and sex4lf57 for angrily letting me know that my story restarted a couple of times. I have asked the editors of Literotica to please accept my corrected submission. I hope the edited copy is more clear to you and makes for easier reading. Rest assured, there is more to come.

this is for the boys nicky should have done his mom too and had danny do her too and they should have done a DP on both moms one in the ass and one in the pussy to both women . ps just some thought for your next story

Loved your story dude, the descrptions were great, the build up was clever, for me im not into bi but it added a little to the story i suppose, i think this can carry on to be a top spot story if the carry-on is as good as the fiesr part ( shame about the fucked up editing).

I look foward to Ch. 2

Thanks again

Jagnag

Great story, but desperately needs fixing.

My third read of this story. Great read.... Motuckey

thought gemma might get in on the act but 7pages of hoo haa

I liked the story bug this version had the first part repeated 3 times. Can't wait for part 2. Maybe Njjck and Da will fuck Nicks mom for her birthday.

You just had to go ruin it with your dick sucking factory. That's when I quit reading

Same story three times dumb.