All Comments on 'Hot In The Hot Tub'

by elpavilion

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swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Excellent debut!

Hard to believe this is your first story. Very erotic and well-written. Five stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just another cheating slut

And her stupid husband. Horrible.

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
Let's welcome

another new writer to Lit. and LW. A very good first story and written in very good style. Very good use of tags. One of my pet peeves = sticking a shit-covered cock into a pussy.

thebuffalothebuffaloover 9 years ago

Kudos! Very well written and hotter than hell. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hey, another ID

Good grief, how many different ID do you have SwingerJos.

sandymonroesandymonroeover 9 years ago

Very hot quckie! I really loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good job

A nice hot story of love and lust. Nothing wrong with it except it needs a.followup soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
miss anything?

Good story, but seemed intent on including everything possible. No need for the oversize, the 3+ male orgasms, the toys, the post anal vaginal, etc., all in 1 story. Pick a turn-on & leave something for follow-on. The only follow-on this one leaves open seems to be to invite the menagerie. /

elpavilionelpavilionover 9 years agoAuthor
miss anything

Thanks for that tip. I get what you are saying. And I'll keep it in mind.

Thanks for the nice comments so far. They made my day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just bad fourth rate rendition of a stroke story.

Utterly pathetic. 1* !

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it

I will forever remember those sex filled nights in the hot tub. With my husband. With some of his friends. With two of my coworkers. With some of the neighbor's. With some of the neighbor's teen sons. I can't begin to guess the number of times I was fucked in The hot tub. My husband is gone now and those days are just memories. Very, very good memories.

widowedidiotwidowedidiotalmost 6 years ago
Wow!!!

Wow is all I can say. I normally don't read this kind of stories because the husband almost always gets in there while the wife is trying to enjoy a different cock. But I'm glad that I decided to read this particular one. Loved it.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Whore and cuck soup. All you need is another asshole in the hot tub.

Client8Client812 months ago

Very cute, loved it, simply and well composed. Kudos

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