by elpavilion
Hard to believe this is your first story. Very erotic and well-written. Five stars from me.
another new writer to Lit. and LW. A very good first story and written in very good style. Very good use of tags. One of my pet peeves = sticking a shit-covered cock into a pussy.
A nice hot story of love and lust. Nothing wrong with it except it needs a.followup soon.
Good story, but seemed intent on including everything possible. No need for the oversize, the 3+ male orgasms, the toys, the post anal vaginal, etc., all in 1 story. Pick a turn-on & leave something for follow-on. The only follow-on this one leaves open seems to be to invite the menagerie. /
Thanks for that tip. I get what you are saying. And I'll keep it in mind.
Thanks for the nice comments so far. They made my day.
I will forever remember those sex filled nights in the hot tub. With my husband. With some of his friends. With two of my coworkers. With some of the neighbor's. With some of the neighbor's teen sons. I can't begin to guess the number of times I was fucked in The hot tub. My husband is gone now and those days are just memories. Very, very good memories.
Wow is all I can say. I normally don't read this kind of stories because the husband almost always gets in there while the wife is trying to enjoy a different cock. But I'm glad that I decided to read this particular one. Loved it.