All Comments on 'Hot Night with Jack and Irene'

written--I suspect that there will be anal in the next chapter which will earn a 00 from me and turn me off from his other offerings

After Jack and Irene fuck the first time, have them make their own little porn video.

stupid endding it started out good but you ruined it when she said "i'm yours tonight" that and his going along with it killed the story it would have been better if after she told him she was his tonight he said "if it's only one night forget it it isn't worth it"then askd her to leave his roomplease keep your stories believable

watcher of the night has started us off on quite a love story, filled with passion that brothers and sisters fully realize.

Sweet writing.

Vrty entertaining. I ike an author who knows how to use the English language, One who does use gutter slang at the drop of a hat.As for character development, I like characters that are self-confident, have strong sense of self and are not afraid to express themself, either verbally, physically or emotionally.