All Comments on 'Hot Sex in Madrid Ch. 02'

by LouisaLove

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fridayamfridayamover 14 years ago
Wonderful

A marvellous second chapter. You must add more.

stewartwenstewartwenabout 14 years ago

Cracking story and so well written.

S

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well written, but...

When Louisa wrote, "I had never known such delightful felatio," she was telling the truth. She still hasn't.

What she was experiencing was delightful cunnilingus. It's only felatio if a penis is involved. [If you're going to write erotica, you have to learn the terminology!]

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