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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

But what's the rush?

Needed much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay/teasing before she suddenly began to suck his cock.

Needed her making her tell him whether he liked her body? And what about it did he like?

Needed her admiring and fondling his cock before she did anything further. And his balls needed some attention.

Sex was altogether too automstic.

Two stars.

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