All Comments on 'Hot Summer Night Ch. 05'

it has to do with Literotica's age policy -- no under 18 year-old sex. Rachel is 17 years old in this chapter of the story. I know that teen's have sex as young as 13 and 14 (I had a 14 year-old student in class who was pregnant) with other teens in thier age range, but the policy could end up getting this chapter pulled at some point. You might want to see if you can find a way to correct this situation. Personally, I think I would have made Rachel, Hannah's 18 year-old cousin who had come to live with them at some point in the last few months. Otherwise, HOT.

Workng on page one of this one, kinda hard reading and enjoying since Hannah is basically turned i to a huge slut:/. Just randomly fucking everything the story loses its atractiveness :(

I know I am behind in reading the story but I agree with the other post about Hannah getting laid at work. I kinda like keeping it in the family. I think the Rachel age was maybe a typo. The ONLY problem I have is with Hannah's Dad. I have zero tolerance for drunk driving, even in fantasy land so Hannah should have let him get busted and go to jail. But that is just me. Like I said love the story

That chapter had me fingering myself and I had 4 orgasms the whole time!!

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

For some reason I did not like this one .. I Still think You are a good writer

This dirty old man. Has been hard and stroking almost from the first sentence of this hot, hot story. Please keep it up! LOL at the pun

"upstairs so i could fuck the daylights out of julia" yeah dude you just got me wet with this line no big deal

I didnt like father cheating on mom, after this i dont like mom cheating on dad even before all this, and i certainly dont like the 'setup' of mom and julia against dad. So only 2*.

Now all this is clear i'll be able to give more *'s, because i do like the writing.

I knew it was a set up from the scene where Hannah and Julia blew Mark while Carrie "slept". I figured it was because of an affair, and I was right. But, Mark shouldn't have caved so fast. Real emotions would've gone the other way until they talked him into it. Lost opportunity for IPC, which could've been fun.

Of course, this also means the daughter has been playing him for a year as well. He needs to not just fall into their web, but take control. Probably won't happen in this story line though. The guy seems too weak and border line submissive

Damn! Just better and better!