All Comments on 'Hot Summer Night Ch. 11'

by BigZeke13

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max052max052almost 10 years ago
Geez, good thing this is a fantasy...

I take Cialis. Dosage is 1 every 36 hours. I don't even want to think how much damage an overdose like this would do. At least a good time was had by all. Also hope there were no sick people in that hospital, they would have died for lack of attention. All said and done perfect 5 star and fave story. I may have to quit my job so I can spend all my time reading your submissions. Thanks and please give us more.

max052

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I'm sorry, but not as good as past chapters.

Unless this fantasy was set pre-early 80's, nurses in dresses and candy-strippers? The only nurses I see in dresses today are near or past retirement, and I cannot remember the last time I saw a candy-stripper. Even a good fantasy has elements that feel true to life. Sex scenes were hot, but an element of reality would have made them better.

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