All Comments on 'Hot Teacher, Sexy Student'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Editor needed.

The professor's name is spelled at least two different ways in this story. There are many instances of subject/verb disagreement and tense issues, which are quite distracting. I personally don't find this story believable or likely, so it's hard to get into it. You might want to run this by an editor, then republish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Over-obsessed of herself. Your spelling, grammar, and vocab is just ughhh.. Horrible. Get a fucking editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Fucking horrible. I feel like you're a 12 year old writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
erm...

...this didn't actually happen

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ridiculous

Total waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Written by someone who doesn't know how seduction with someone who may not want her advances works.

darkobrandon2024darkobrandon20249 months ago

Ignore the elitist comments on this story. I got off to it and that's all that matters.

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