All Comments on 'Hot Tub for Four'

by Steve Orshon

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biggun76biggun76over 19 years ago
Good story

Well done. Well written and a good read. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
'bout time!

Nicely written Steve...like all your work I have read. All very believable too.

About time someone other than her husband has finally scored a fuck with the more than desirable Paula. She sounds very similiar to my wife...although I think mine probably would of fucked Ron on the first visit!

Keep them coming.

Coops

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Don't Include it

If you are so homophobic about guys going down on each other then don't even include it in your story! Going down on another guy during GROUP sex is not a big deal. You want your wives to go down on each other but you are unwilling to do the same with the other husband. I guess I just don't get it. I never expect my wife to go down on another wife unless I'm willing to suck the other guy. Double standard!! After about 12 years of swinging/swapping/group sex, I am still NOT gay. I do not go out looking to have sex with other men. I will suck another guy during group sex only. It's not a big deal, try it some time. It shows your wife that you are willing to do the same thing that you want them to do and turns most women on.

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGalmost 15 years ago
awesome

I love a good hot tub story, and I love everything about this one, great buildup. I'm not gay or bi but I do find it hot that the men have some interaction too.

Greyheaded1Greyheaded1over 5 years ago
4 stars- hot - Um Lubrications

OK it is fantasy and fiction but hot tub or bath or shower or pool water washes away women’s pussy juice and sex without lube is painful and no fun.

Anal sex without lube is painful. No fun.

Minor details but I wonder if Steve has actually experienced what he writes.

moimeme68moimeme68about 2 years ago

Great story, I really enjoyed it!

olblueyesolblueyes9 months ago

loved this little sex tale,,but the ending was spoiled for me by paula's on and off sexuality...either she is a partner or not, no in between.

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