All Comments on 'Hot Tub Ch. 01: Service Girl'

by Athalia

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Bad Girl

What a bad girl. I wish that I could meet up with an Emily.

litfan10litfan10over 13 years ago
well done story

very smooth, good writing with very likable characters with well described, hot sex. Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story

I enjoyed this story very much, thank you.

JimSnivelyJimSnivelyabout 10 years ago
Brava, Athalia!

Re-reading the Hot-Tub series (and "Summertime Sex Ed" as well) confirmed that Athalia is one of the most talented erotic writers I've ever read. Thanks for all the pleasure you've given me, A.!

EROTICFUNEROTICFUNover 9 years ago
Great writing!

Very descriptive and hot without reading like pure porn. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nicely Done!

Tender. Sweet. Sexy. Erotic. Loved the interplay! Continue writing her fuck stories!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a29 days ago

Good opening story. Author knows how to use the English language. Finally, seldom uses gutter slang. When used, it is appropriate to the story line.

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