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Dark_StormDark_Stormalmost 8 years ago
Meh

I've been enjoying this story a lot. The language used sets the era. It reminds me a bit of the classic Victorian sex novel, "My Secret Life", the tale of a young man coming into his sexual prime through encounters with various women in Victorian-era England.

That being said, this chapter was a bit of a downer. I can't imagine that "one pump and done" encounters--no matter how frequent--would be very satisfying for our hero. There's more to sex than just shooting your load in a convenient orifice. Even masturbation would be better. At least it would last longer. If anything, these quickies would cause our hero to develop a hair-trigger, which would ruin him for any future encounters with new partners.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 7 years ago
Is Bianca still married?

Does she have a sister? :+))

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Retired but still practising academic, specialist in language and literature. Highly sexed and sexual but not so active in the last few years. Enjoy writing erotic stories, which reveal favourite themes and features.

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