All Comments on 'Hotel Bargain Ch. 02'

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skip5236skip5236almost 16 years ago
Intensely hot

Particularly loved the twist at the end where he gets him off, knowing full well it will kill his enthusiasm, then forces him to keep servicing. Extremely well done, excellent humiliation!

Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaalmost 16 years ago
Almost too much

Piling on the humiliation pushes this story to the brink of implausibility. The incidents might have been better spread over a couple of encounters rather than just one. Nevertheless, very well written. Best, Ken

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edabout 15 years ago
Heyburn rules

He needs to submit and he gets his wish. Becoming the worthless cunt face after getting a quick hand job was a nuce touch. Will there ever be another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Wonderfully written, I hope you write more!

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