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Click hereByron allowed me to spend a few days visiting my loved ones. But it was only for a short time. He wanted me to accompany him to New Orleans, where police and detectives were already actively searching for Alma. I visited my girlfriends, who were at the time in New York on a tour. I saw Linda again and gave her hope, telling her that Byron knew the woman who had kidnapped Ron. In a way, it was fitting that I would take part in bringing Alma to justice. She had been responsible for my wrongful imprisonment and she had kidnapped Ron, a man whom I had come to love. These feelings were a mix of friendship and some erotic longing, but I knew that we could not be an item, considering his wife Linda being in the picture. But I wanted to help find Ron and finally get back at Alma.
I was in New York only for about three days and before long, Byron Johnson was urging me to pack my things and get ready to fly with him to New Orleans. He told me to be fully prepared. I must say it was all very exciting. There was a touch of danger in all of this, but I felt safe with Byron, and with the gun I was told to procure. Everything was set and we were off to the Big Easy down South in Louisiana.
Audrey, I like your "Hotel Heiress" series, don't get me wrong. It's well-written, reads like sexy memoirs and I also like that this rich chick has adventures in different locations and that in these different settings you write hot sex scenes. But writing about prison life and lesbians is pretty hard to do. Unless you know what really goes on in there and you've experienced it, all you'll be doing is making stuff up. But then again Literotica is pure escapism and fantasy. Still, I kinda wish this Valerie character experienced prison rape and expected more filthy, hardcore and untamed stuff since it's set in a prison. I guess you were afraid to go too far. But it's your style and you can't change it if it works for you. Keep up the good work.
I read this new story by AudreyHepburn, and it made me go back to the beginning of the series and read all the way through. I thought it was great! I suppose her inspiration is Paris Hilton, but Valerie is much more likable than that spoiled brat. I like that the locations keep changing but the sex stays hot all the time. I will definitely read the next installment.