All Comments on 'Hotel Rendezvous'

by Babygirl220

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GaleaFiguroGaleaFiguroover 6 years ago

Now your character has alluded to a future. You need to keep going with it, I guess. It's the only way to make Tom seem...like he isn't a fuckboy. Can't wait till part 2.

moodydudemoodydudeabout 6 years ago
Hanging on every word

You had me hanging on every word. I even reread it a couple of times. Really an excellent piece of writing. I hope you keep adding more stories to the ones you have already written.

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