All Comments on 'Hotel Stranger Sex'

by Erinteresting

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow!

Only thing wrong is the story is too short. Great build-up, but no staying power. Keep writing!

ErinterestingErinterestingover 9 years agoAuthor
I agree!

This was my first attempt and I already see a few things I would change-- including the length and build-up. Next time I'll make it longer ;)

GriffyD_BoyGriffyD_Boyabout 9 years ago

It's not bad, but a little too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story - Great descriptions!

What at fun story……..has long been a fantasy of mine!

NEOhio1972NEOhio1972over 8 years ago
Great story

Loved the topic. As a guy that travels a lot and stays in hotels. Agree with longer. But like the creativity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bullshit

But thanks

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 4 years ago
Love it Nasty!!!

And this cum inducing story got me soooo

worked up I was pumping myself like a madman whilst reading your words!

Especially that whole paragraph where you were completing stuffed while still grinding your clit on the couch! You are fucking amazing lady🙌🏽 and when describing all that "hot" cum on your back & how you love it when it's still fresh and warm,I came SO hard I actually let ou a satisfying groan....fuck that was hot! Thank you so much for that....

And Please

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