by The_Technician
I really enjoy your writing and your ability to tell the story so that vivid images can be seen in our minds. I have read many other stories you have submitted but not all. But when I see your name as the author, it's an automatic "take a look" because this one has to be very good.
5 stars.
I wasn't entirely sure about this story until the end. Seemed like a lot of technical stuff without enough tension. But the ending! Great job. I liked that very much.I hope you do more.
reduce the technical stuff a bit and add more of the neighbour.
Being a techie the engineering helped me visualize the story more. It really turned me on. Love to see what her neighbor wants to do and maybe what her ideas were for the hot house. After all there are more cables. Part two please
This story had me dripping with pre-cum. I really enjoyed the story. Looking for this one to continue on.
Your story pulled me in. Now I want a hot house and know pretty much how to build it.
If you liked this story. I suggest that you read the story "Slowly, slowly." written by the same author. It's on similar lines of self bdsm with longer time of bondage. I enjoyed it personally.